In my opinion, I would be rich with money rather than with my friends. I would be rich with money because,I can enjoy fabulous life with my family,can start the charitable trust by helping poor,old people and can help my best friends by sharing my money who are in trouble. First, I would be rich with my money by buying the property like Mansion which consists of ten rooms,swimming pool,living rooms and large space of basement etc..I would buy charted flight for travelling and can give good quality of life for my family. Next, I can start a charitable trust by giving lives to the poor and old people.By giving lives to old and poor people can keep me in their heart. The other, I can help my best friends by sharing the money who are in trouble. For example, Last year I met a friend in India who need to get an open heart surgery and the cost for surgery is one million dollar. As he is poor,I helped him to get that surgery and saved my friend's life. In conclusion, being rich with money, can enjoy fabulous life with my family,can start the charitable trust by helping poor,old people and can help my best friends .
I think, I would be rich with a friends tan rather be rich with a money, because is more generous, relieved, and jolly having friends. First, the families are the best in our lives. You can have a lot of friends around us, but it is always nice to have the generosity of our families. Next, sometimes you were relieved when we don’t have our families close, but you have good friends around you. For example, last June I had an accident, and did not have my family with me, but I had my friends who helped and care of me at the wrong time, I was relieved at that time. Finally, people feel happy when you get to a place and feel joy at seeing another person that you have connection, as children, parents, siblings, and friends. People feel jolly with the money, but always the money is gone, you can pay jolly with money, is satisfactory in that moment but not forever. With friends you always feel jolly. Summarizing, rather be rich with a friends like generous, jolly, and relieved than people rather be rich with money.
I would be rich with friends rather than with money. There are some reasons. If you have a lot of money, nobody try to see you. People who around you just think about your money. And when you catch that you might feel huge lonely. Furthermore, money could change you. In my case, I was a greedy person. I had chased money a lot. That time, I was becoming more and more greedy person. I became a person who don't care my people like family, best friends and girlfriend. And I just thought how to earn more money even though I had enough money. I hurt my precious people. Last, your true friends could fill your soul. I have a great memory. When I had a hard time, I saw my best friend. We just sat on a bench for almost an hour without talking. That time I felt warm and comfortable. In conclusion, if you are rich with money, you might feel lonely and become greedy more. Of course, you could not become like that, but you could easily miss feeling that your soul is filled by friendship.
Hello Mr.Ford I have a cold today, so I didn't go to school. I'm so sorry about that. Anyway, I did this homework last night. I hope you understand. Thank you sir!.
In my opinion. I would be rich with friends more than be rich with money because money can't buy everything. Certainly, It's great if you have a lot of money in your bank account that can make you to be a rich person. You can buy a lot of things that you want and it also can change your life to be much better than before, but one thing that you can't buy is the real friend.
You will probably have a lot of friends come to see you almost every day, but all of them might not be the real friends. They try to respect and do something good to you because they need you helped, so It's very difficult to find the best friend around you in your life.
Finally, I would be rich with nice friend that you can enjoy with them and do many things fun together. They are the real friends and never leave you alone. If you have any problems in your life, you can call them and ask for help about your problems. They will always with you, even if you go down in your life. You will always have moral support to do a lot of things that you have to face with them.
Hi Mr. Ford I would rather be rich with money, Bacuese i would help people, friend , make school, and own business. I would help people, Bacuese i saw a lot of people don't have money, And found work to them, And i would make school, And if made school, i can help people and friend too, And i would make own business, And if i made own business in America and Saudi Arabia. And if i have all of these i can do anything, And this is my opinion, I know some people don't need rich money, Want rich friend, My opinion i would rich money, Bacuese i said what i want, And i don't need buy friend or anything, If i have money i want help people, And if i buy friend i think it's not good, Bacuese if you buy friend they want just your money, They don't need real life, And that so bad, I want friend like when i met with friend when i was 7 years old, That is real life for me, And i missed all my life now, because i have homesick.
In general, people imagine a person who has a lot of money when they hear the word "rich". In my opinion, however, a rich person lives happy and affluent life. So, I think true friends make me rich, because they don't betray, they always encourage, and they always remember me.
First, they never leave me. For example, when I spend time on money, they always disappear, but when I spend time on my friends, they always come closer.
Second, they always encourage. For example, in the movie, "Cast Away", Robinson could come out of an island, because a volley ball encouraged him.
Lastly, they always remember me. For example, when I die, they remember our memories, but my money will go to my children or somewhere else as inheritance tax.
In conclusion, I would rather be rich with friends than with money.
Well I think I would rather be rich with friends than with money. Because money can't buy friendship, can it? I am really lucky to have very great friends. Friends help you when ever your in need. Money doesn't help you when your really in need. Example when you need someone to talk your going to talk to you friends not money. When you need advice or want to share a secrect then you would want to go to a friend not to money. In conclusion money doesn't stay for long but friends do. Friends can help you with any thing but money can't. That is why I think friends are very important in life.
In my opinion, most of people want to be rich and think the money bring the happiness to them. Would you be happy if you have whole the money in this world and no one exist? I would to be rich with friends rather than rich with money because friend can help you and stick up for you and enjoy or join you with whatever comes to entertain yourself.
Firs of all, friends can help and stick up for you with any things you need and with any problems you have even if you can't solve with money. For example, if you were traveling outside your country to continue your studies and your family aren't with you, you are going to feel homesick, but if you met people who are from your country or culture and you make friendship with them you will not feel the same way that if you were alone in a country that is not your home with no family and friends.
Second, friends can enjoy and join you to entertain yourself and make you happy with whatever comes in your mind, for example, having a journey and hanging hanging out. You are going to feel bored if you go somewhere to have fun if you were alone.
In conclusion, I would to be rich with friends rather than rich with money because friends can help,stick up for me and enjoy or join me to entertain ourselves with any things they and I want.
I would rather be rich with friends than rich with money, because with your friends you can share many things, some times they are a good support and friends are selfless.
First, you can share many things with your friends for example enjoy free time like a trip, go outside ... The good times are in your memory and you can remember all the time, but the money never do that. You can delight your winnings and many times your friends can help you for your personal growth.
Secondly, the friends is a good support for example when you are in trouble, a friend help you or give a good tip or advice. When you are ill they help, sometimes you need only a hug or a smile and friend can do that, but you can’t buy this things.
finally, a friendship is selfless, because this relationship is loyal, you receive good things all the times, like a good word, good regards and joys.
In conclusion, I enjoy to stay with my friends because you can share many things, some times they are a good support and friends are selfless. For these reasons I would rather be rich with friends than rich with money.
Hello Mr.Ford,
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, I would be rich with money rather than with my friends.
I would be rich with money because,I can enjoy fabulous life with my family,can start the charitable trust by helping poor,old people and can help my best friends by sharing my money who are in trouble.
First, I would be rich with my money by buying the property like Mansion which consists of ten rooms,swimming pool,living rooms and large space of basement etc..I would buy charted flight for travelling and can give good quality of life for my family.
Next, I can start a charitable trust by giving lives to the poor and old people.By giving lives to old and poor people can keep me in their heart.
The other, I can help my best friends by sharing the money who are in trouble. For example, Last year I met a friend in India who need to get an open heart surgery and the cost for surgery is one million dollar. As he is poor,I helped him to get that surgery and saved my friend's life.
In conclusion, being rich with money, can enjoy fabulous life with my family,can start the charitable trust by helping poor,old people and can help my best friends .
Very nice Santosh!!#mr.ford
ReplyDeleteHi Mr. Ford
ReplyDeleteI think, I would be rich with a friends tan rather be rich with a money, because is more generous, relieved, and jolly having friends.
First, the families are the best in our lives. You can have a lot of friends around us, but it is always nice to have the generosity of our families.
Next, sometimes you were relieved when we don’t have our families close, but you have good friends around you. For example, last June I had an accident, and did not have my family with me, but I had my friends who helped and care of me at the wrong time, I was relieved at that time.
Finally, people feel happy when you get to a place and feel joy at seeing another person that you have connection, as children, parents, siblings, and friends. People feel jolly with the money, but always the money is gone, you can pay jolly with money, is satisfactory in that moment but not forever. With friends you always feel jolly.
Summarizing, rather be rich with a friends like generous, jolly, and relieved than people rather be rich with money.
Wow!! You made a great example in your third paragraph, and you used very good transition words!! Awesome job!#mr.ford
ReplyDeleteI would be rich with friends rather than with money. There are some reasons. If you have a lot of money, nobody try to see you. People who around you just think about your money. And when you catch that you might feel huge lonely. Furthermore, money could change you. In my case, I was a greedy person. I had chased money a lot. That time, I was becoming more and more greedy person. I became a person who don't care my people like family, best friends and girlfriend. And I just thought how to earn more money even though I had enough money. I hurt my precious people. Last, your true friends could fill your soul. I have a great memory. When I had a hard time, I saw my best friend. We just sat on a bench for almost an hour without talking. That time I felt warm and comfortable. In conclusion, if you are rich with money, you might feel lonely and become greedy more. Of course, you could not become like that, but you could easily miss feeling that your soul is filled by friendship.
ReplyDeleteSolid work Charlie!! I like how you write from your own life experiences. That makes your essay more personal and people like that.#mr.ford
DeleteSolid work Charlie! I like how you draw from your own personal experiences.#mr.ford
DeleteHello Mr.Ford
ReplyDeleteI have a cold today, so I didn't go to school. I'm so sorry about that. Anyway, I did this homework last night. I hope you understand. Thank you sir!.
In my opinion. I would be rich with friends more than be rich with money because money can't buy everything. Certainly, It's great if you have a lot of money in your bank account that can make you to be a rich person. You can buy a lot of things that you want and it also can change your life to be much better than before, but one thing that you can't buy is the real friend.
You will probably have a lot of friends come to see you almost every day, but all of them might not be the real friends. They try to respect and do something good to you because they need you helped, so It's very difficult to find the best friend around you in your life.
Finally, I would be rich with nice friend that you can enjoy with them and do many things fun together. They are the real friends and never leave you alone. If you have any problems in your life, you can call them and ask for help about your problems. They will always with you, even if you go down in your life. You will always have moral support to do a lot of things that you have to face with them.
Good work Benzo. It is a little short, but you organize it very well. #mr.ford
DeleteHi Mr. Ford
ReplyDeleteI would rather be rich with money, Bacuese i would help people, friend , make school, and own business.
I would help people, Bacuese i saw a lot of people don't have money, And found work to them, And i would make school, And if made school, i can help people and friend too, And i would make own business, And if i made own business in America and Saudi Arabia. And if i have all of these i can do anything, And this is my opinion, I know some people don't need rich money, Want rich friend, My opinion i would rich money, Bacuese i said what i want, And i don't need buy friend or anything, If i have money i want help people, And if i buy friend i think it's not good, Bacuese if you buy friend they want just your money, They don't need real life, And that so bad, I want friend like when i met with friend when i was 7 years old, That is real life for me, And i missed all my life now, because i have homesick.
Hey Mohammed!!! Good work!#mr.ford
DeleteIn general, people imagine a person who has a lot of money when they hear the word "rich". In my opinion, however, a rich person lives happy and affluent life. So, I think true friends make me rich, because they don't betray, they always encourage, and they always remember me.
ReplyDeleteFirst, they never leave me. For example, when I spend time on money, they always disappear, but when I spend time on my friends, they always come closer.
Second, they always encourage. For example, in the movie, "Cast Away", Robinson could come out of an island, because a volley ball encouraged him.
Lastly, they always remember me. For example, when I die, they remember our memories, but my money will go to my children or somewhere else as inheritance tax.
In conclusion, I would rather be rich with friends than with money.
WOW!!! Liz this is really good! You are improving in your studies and attendance! Keep up the good work!!#mr.ford
DeleteWell I think I would rather be rich with friends than with money. Because money can't buy friendship, can it? I am really lucky to have very great friends.
ReplyDeleteFriends help you when ever your in need. Money doesn't help you when your really in need. Example when you need someone to talk your going to talk to you friends not money. When you need advice or want to share a secrect then you would want to go to a friend not to money.
In conclusion money doesn't stay for long but friends do. Friends can help you with any thing but money can't. That is why I think friends are very important in life.
Excellent!#mr.ford
DeleteIn my opinion, most of people want to be rich and think the money bring the happiness to them. Would you be happy if you have whole the money in this world and no one exist?
ReplyDeleteI would to be rich with friends rather than rich with money because friend can help you and stick up for you and enjoy or join you with whatever comes to entertain yourself.
Firs of all, friends can help and stick up for you with any things you need and with any problems you have even if you can't solve with money. For example, if you were traveling outside your country to continue your studies and your family aren't with you, you are going to feel homesick, but if you met people who are from your country or culture and you make friendship with them you will not feel the same way that if you were alone in a country that is not your home with no family and friends.
Second, friends can enjoy and join you to entertain yourself and make you happy with whatever comes in your mind, for example, having a journey and hanging hanging out. You are going to feel bored if you go somewhere to have fun if you were alone.
In conclusion, I would to be rich with friends rather than rich with money because friends can help,stick up for me and enjoy or join me to entertain ourselves with any things they and I want.
Great response Fadeel! Keep up the good work!#mr.ford
ReplyDeleteI would rather be rich with friends than rich with money, because with your friends you can share many things, some times they are a good support and friends are selfless.
ReplyDeleteFirst, you can share many things with your friends for example enjoy free time like a trip, go outside ...
The good times are in your memory and you can remember all the time, but the money never do that.
You can delight your winnings and many times your friends can help you for your personal growth.
Secondly, the friends is a good support for example when you are in trouble, a friend help you or give a good tip or advice. When you are ill they help, sometimes you need only a hug or a smile and friend can do that, but you can’t buy this things.
finally, a friendship is selfless, because this relationship is loyal, you receive good things all the times, like a good word, good regards and joys.
In conclusion, I enjoy to stay with my friends because you can share many things, some times they are a good support and friends are selfless. For these reasons I would rather be rich with friends than rich with money.